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Hi Jack,
How are you? We are now in the house of granny becauser our house isn't ready. the first time I see it, it was pretty nice. Is very big. In fact is the biggest house in the town. We made a deal with my dad, if I wash the dishes I will have the biggest room of the house.
I started school yesterday. Is a campestral school in the outsides of the town. It has horses, cows and chikens. Also there is a cat that is very nice. Is named Tita, and she is white and black. I knew a good guy named Rvi. He is very interesting. I have a very good relationship with my mates.
A Lucky Scape
I was in a cementery. Me and my dad were at a wake. My mom´s wake. Then he told me: "I an going to marry". I was stunned. My mom had die two months ago and he was going to marry. Was not correct. I push him out and I start running through the cementery. My dad called me but I still running. I was angry. Few minutes later I was tired and I get into a family grave. I sat behind the main tomb, which seemed to be thousands of years old. Was broken at the sides and hardly read in the table "Maurice Le'blanc, beloved father and brother" Thats the name of my father. Many questions came to my head: "Why is my father's name in this tomb? It's a old familiar?" I decided to open the tomp. The lid was heavy but I could with that. Inside there was nothing. Scared, I run out of the cript but whent i was in the cipt's door my father get in. I slowly recoiled until I hit the grave. Suddenly my father pushed me and locked me inside the tomb, which had his name. One millisecond before I saw his eyes. It was red. I was very scared. Normally my dad's eyes were blue, but not that day. I was quiet and silent. When I heard my dad closing the door and going away, I wait a lot minutes for open the lid. I looked around. I did not believe I saw it. There were people around the tomb with black hoods covering their faces. They had black candles in their hands and they were making a chant that made me sweat cold. The hairs on my skin were pointed. My curiosity could and slowly came down from the grave. I approached one of the people. I touched his hand ... Or that I tried to do. When I was supposed to be in touch with his bony hand, I just passed it. Then all the people took their hoods off and I saw their faces. They were shiny skulls like bowling balls. Their empty basins scoured me and I felt like they were swallowing my soul like orange juice. Some were older than others. To my right were the whiter and cleaner ones, on the other hand, to my left some had moths circling them between their basins and nostrils. I was gagged by the smell so nauseating. I ducked into a rather uncomfortable fetal position, but it was better than seeing their faces. I crawl on the floor until I hit the door. I'll talk about it, but one of them grabs my shirt. I turn and hit him in the hand with a clenched fist. He releases me and I stop and run.
the arlecchino's carnaval
the old blind guitar
the percistance of remembers
an online comment
Hi Oscar, you should definitely skate. Maybe you could buy a pair of skates and go to the street. Why don't you get into a club? Or what about create a team with your classmates? Also don't forget to use a helmet and drink a lot o water. Remember to breath well for not get tired and enjoy your summer.
Alejandra, Bogoya.
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You missed the activities you do together.
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Good job! score 6
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ResponderBorrarNice story but you must follow the parameters given in class.
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NO COMPLETE!
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